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[Orig][FanFic] The Adventures of Macho Caballo, Chapter 0, Prolog

by James Eades <jeeades@[EMAIL PROTECTED] > Oct 18, 2007 at 07:47 PM

Every tale must begin somewhere, every story must have it's foundation
- where it all started, even if that story is late in coming.  

I present Macho Caballo 0 - the Source of the Curse.


****** The Adventures of Macho Caballo  ******
A Tale of Understanding

PROLOG:

It begins in the still of this cave in central Mexico, deep
underground, where silver water ripples and chuckles to itself,
flowing from ewers of granite. At one time boiling hot, the flow has
cooled until it is merely tepid, for the water has traveled far
beneath the golden brown skin of this land, traveled in the arteries
of a continent, seen surface barriers as mere trifles, mountains as
amusement rides, deep lakes as ****tals to the infinite.

For now, at this moment in time, the water gurgles out of confinement,
wa****ng over precious minerals and gold, pouring upward from the
piercing blackness of the depths.

The water remembers.

It recalls the first men to step across its faltering streams to the
north as they followed the game, their tribes migrating south, as if
it were this very instant - for time is seen differently by the water.

It recalls a time....

v^v^v^v

In the dawn of civilization, during the triumph of the Mayas, there
arose a tale - of a boy kept from his true love because she had been
taken to be a temple maiden. Trying to get to his love, he dressed as
a girl and slipped past the temple guards. Travelers speak of a
festival in that country to this day, celebrating the romance.

However, there is a dark side to the story, of the means the boy used
to fool the guards, for some say he enlisted the help of a witch, who
presented him with a choice - accept a terrible consequence or give up
his love. If one thinks about it, the boy would have had to have been
very convincing. Temple maidens were sacred and their guards would
have been prepared for tricks by amorous suitors. After all, any one
can wear a dress.

Thus was formed the first curse.

v^v^v^v

It was centuries later, in the 1500s, by our way of reckoning.

A schism had developed in the league of Aztec sorcerers who advised
Moctezuma. Loyal sorcerers had become convinced that the newly arrived
Spaniards were related to the feathered serpent Quetzalcoatl and were,
underneath, wise and peaceful. These sorcerers favored the ruler's
interpretation and tried to explain why the newcomers were not acting
as predicted.

The other side was more pragmatic and prepared for the end of their
world. The horsemen of the invader's faith had arrived, with famine,
plague, war and unrest loose upon the land. Facing the destruction of
all that they revered, these sorcerers made preparations. Strong
preparations.

v^v^v^v

Beneath a man-made hill, illuminated only by a single shaft of light
filtering down from a hole hundreds of feet above, two people
struggled. One held aloft a wafer of obsidian, variegated brown and
white and liquid red, while the other person served only one purpose
in the ceremony, and that was to bleed. A drop of reddest blood fell
away, unnoticed, to enter a darker shaft, a well cut hundreds of years
before by sanctified priests of a god long since passed up by the
current religion.

Through space and time it fell, this tiny drop of reddest fluid, until
it found the water, and the water paused to reflect on what should be
done with this humble sacrifice. Through centuries the water
reflected, until the time was right, for water had its own way of
reckoning time.

Wise men say, "Do not joke with water, for while it may be true that
water has a sense of humor, the joke will always be on you."

It begins in the still of this cave.

Thus was formed the second curse.

v^v^v^v

Always, there were the drums. A deep, sonorous sob, barely above the
level of perception, heard far off across the fields and valleys and
hills.

Closer, now, and let the drums sweep you in. Sweep you into the warm
darkness of their deep, slow pulse.

Closer yet, and you can no longer hear them, for the sensation presses
upon your vital organs, pressing and releasing in a slow, impelling
rhythm, compressing and releasing and all the while pulling you closer
yet, until there is nothing but the warm darkness welcoming you in and
under and down, sinking like slow sand as you move down under their
weight, until you have no choice but to obey their compulsion.

You step onto the next ledge, and the next, rising over the multitudes
below and looking down to see nothing but the waves of a sea of
humanity breaking about this man-made hill. The soul of the sky
beckons you yet upward, until you reach the top and you lie back to
stare at the fading stars.

Centuries passed. It was time for water to decree the third curse.

v^v^v^v

The Adventure Begins:

The place was somewhere between the civilization of La Capitol, Mexico
City, and the insignificant town of Villarica del Norte. From the deep
brush, along a half-hidden trail, came a bellow of rage.

"They have nothing!"

Ramon twisted about, facing the person who had shoved him pell-mell
into the stockade enclosure. A huge, muscular man in a topknot of
unfamiliar design towered over him, ****d except for tattoos and a
loin-cloth decorated with mystical symbols - a warrior, from a tribe
Ramon knew not.

Rolling quickly to his feet, Ramon faced his attacker, but a spear of
sunlight breaking through thick tree-branches overhead hid the man's
face from him in brilliant glare. The man motioned him back and
commanded, "Get back with with your companions or they die!"

His companions, three girls from the village he had just passed
through, were cowering at the rear of the tiny stockade. High timber
walls blocked escape on three sides. As he watched, the last wall rose
to enclose them, hempen ropes smoking and straining over a staunch
tree limb as the warrior hauled on them.

The smallest of the three girls broke into terrified sobs. The other
two girls, closer to Ramon's age, stared with wide-eyed despair at the
barrier of log walls closing them in.

>From the bushes, crows laughed - a raucous cackle without heart or
mercy.

"What is this place?" cried one of the girls.

"This is a cage!" Ramon yelled at her, his patience strained. "It's a
trap, and you led us right into it! Stupid girls!"

He vented a disgusted sigh. Life had been so uncomplicated only a few
hours before.


v^v^v^v

Years Ago - It Might Have Been This Morning:

Slowly, dawn slivers the horizon until only one bright light is left
in the heavens, close to the verge - the glittering diamond that is
Venus, the morning star.

Three dark figures watch the early morning sky.

One speaks, "Our wisest leaders think to placate them, but they cannot
be stopped. All the while, the Goddess of Death descends into her
fiery home."

A second figure nods gravely. "Soon there will needs be a sacrifice."

Time goes away for a measure, and then another, lost in obscurity,
almost as the underground rivers flow far beneath the surface and
traverse the length of the Mexican nation.

Far from their hill, rising above the Mexican peninsula, the bright
spark of Venus spins in its orbit, sometimes gracing the morning,
sometimes appearing as the evening star.

Far out in the solar system the other planets turn, almost like a
cosmic clock.

The concentric circles of planetary orbits ****mmer as symbols fade
into view - astrological glyphs from ancient days. These glyphs
distort until they become Mayan writing and then the circles fade into
the Aztec calendar, rolling along in the starry background. Music
trills - tympanic and flauten - along with a deep, sonorous drumbeat
more felt than heard.

A boy stirs and yawns in a weathered shed beside the hard-surfaced
road, stretching as he rises to face the morning sun, trying to
remember his dream...

He had been suspended above a great round circle, with blinding light
spilling down from above, while from somewhere a huge drum sobbed,
like a giant, beating heart. The thumps had filled him with a nameless
dread. Even now he looks about, for he can still hear them....

Lines appear across the circle of the calendar clock, the symbols fade
away and the wheel rolls. The circle becomes a cart-wheel, built of
planks bolted together with a rusty hub, clunking along the bumpy
gravel road. The music devolves into the thump of the road, while the
flute becomes the complaint of an ungreased hub, rising and falling
with the wheels tortured progress over the roadway. Seeking the
sounds, the boy spies the mule and cart.

"Heh," says Ramon Caballo, son of Manuel Caballo, the self-confessed
greatest horse-trainer in all of Mexico. "A dumb old cart-wheel.
That's all. I knew it all along."

He gathers his pouch and resumes his journey.

 

v^v^v^v

It was earlier in the morning before the ambush, and life was good.
Ramon was doing what he did best.

He ran.

He ran with the easy grace of unhurried speed, the mile-eating pace of
his ancestors relaying messages from rulers of one city to another, a
courier without a purpose, a horse-master without a steed, afoot on
the royal road from Tenochtitlan past Tula, the former Toltec capitol.

He ran the way his forefathers did, with the easy, rangy gait of the
antelope, a flowing, springy step that conveyed him north toward home.

His pouch, fa****oned like the messenger pouches of centuries before,
swung close by his side in easy rhythm to the relentless motion of his
legs and arms. The people he swept past - farmers trudging to their
fields, families on their way to market, children playing in fruit
groves along the gravel road - waved and gave him their encouraging
grins, as if he were truly one of those who sped messages between the
lords of the land in time before.

Three hundred years before he would have hurried his pouch past
majestic temples and shrines, monuments to honor deities of earth and
sky. Now these buildings were the rubble over which his calloused feet
trod, the ancient gods, once honored, now forbidden even to memory by
the new order, their faces and shapes carried in the designs woven
into the fabric of his pack, chosen by craftsman only because their
patterns were pleasing to the eye.

He ran where others would have ridden prancing ponies, up the dusty
farm roads between fields of corn, beans, squash and melon. Past
island villages and hamlets he flowed, the road a river, huts and
hovels and adobe chalets floating on the stream.

On previous dawns children had been already up and about, doing their
chores, feeding their animals and preparing to help with the crops.
Young boys ran alongside him, laughing and shouting for a while and
being left behind as he never stopped, never faltered in his step.

Girls waved from their fields and called, giggling as he passed on,
whispering to themselves as they watched him ignore them.

He had spent the night in an unused shed, without supper. With this
dawn came a gnawing hunger and he was happy to see a cozy village,
floating like a collection of rafts on a sea of vegetables, with waves
of corn, beans and squash lapping at the edges. He headed for the town
center, where someone was surely cooking a late breakfast. Villagers
stirred, plumes of kitchen smoke lifted from squat chimneys and
tantalizing odors wafted into the roadway.

A man in dusty travel garb, leaning against the side of an adobe wall,
stirred as Ramon passed. "Senor!" the man said, in a hoarse whisper.
"You journey to Villarica, no?"

"Um, yes," Ramon paused, wary because, although the fellow did not
appear to be dangerous, you couldn't tell about those who lived on the
open road.

"The highway takes a dogleg to the east up ahead, going around the
swamp. If you cut through, you can save a whole day. I'm going that
way but I do not like traveling by myself. Perhaps we can accompany
one another and I will feel safer, not being alone."

Ramon's chest swelled imperceptibly. "Perhaps," he agreed. "I
might...."

"Hola! Could you be Ramon de Caballo?" A middle-aged woman appeared,
dressed in blouse and skirt for the mid-day heat to come, with a
mantilla wrapped about her shoulders to ward off the early morning
chill. When Ramon turned back, the dusty man had slipped away.

"We have been told to expect you on this day!" the woman went on.
"Come! My nieces have prepared breakfast!"

"Nieces?" Ramon said, feeling a sense of unease.

"Esmeralda and Felicia. They are anxious to meet you," the woman
smiled as she looked Ramon up and down, saying "They will not be
disappointed."

"What exactly were you told about me?" he asked, as the woman guided
him to the village square. The mujera only smiled amiably and did not
answer. Up ahead, a group of children watched them, with the boys
staring in open animosity and the girls craning for a glimpse of his
face.

"Ohboy," groaned Ramon. He slowed his pace as he came into the village
center where the boys and girls were breaking their fast with chilies
and sausages wrapped about with flat corn tortillas.

"My nieces!" announced the mujere.

Ramon's nose twitched as he looked down the row of attractive girls.

The first one wore her dress impeccably neat, her seams sewn with
pride and precision, her buttons fastened in a perfect row up the back
of her blouse. Though the fabric was faded and worn, her gold-chased
belt was expensive. In her eyes, Ramon was certain that he saw the
reflection of pesos.

The second girl had allowed the white cotton of her blouse to fall
enough to disclose a scandalous half-inch more of tanned shoulder than
was proper. A strand of wayward hair gave her a glamorous, exotic
look, with hearts sparkling from the depths of her soulful dark eyes.

The third girl looked up at him with a smudge of dust on her cheek,
her dress the victim of rough-and-tumble with her playmates a few
moments before. In her eyes, Ramon thought he saw candied sweets
promised for good behavior.

There was an older woman, or 'mujere,' standing behind and to the side
of the girls, a fixed gleam of great expectations in her eyes, her
white teeth exposed like polished fence posts in a rigid smile of
hopefulness.

Ramon turned to her in resignation. "Let me guess," he said. "You've
been talking to my old man, right? Stocky man, bushy hair? He's got
****fty eyes and a big appetite."

"Oh, no!" protested the woman. "He has such such deep, trustful eyes!
But, yes, he had an appetite! Caramba, that man could eat!"

"Of course he had trustful eyes!" grumbled Ramon. "He's a used horse
dealer! What did he tell you so you would give him something to eat?"

The mujere blushed and waved her fingers. "He tells us that he has a
son. He tells us that he is young..." She stopped to look him over and
added, nodding, "...and you are young, but not too much so." She
smiled, and Ramon ****vered, reminded of the smile of a hungry cat.

"That he is handsome, and you are..." A chorus of sighs from all three
girls emphasized her words. "...and that he has been attending the
prestigious Universidad del Ranchero...."

The first girl leaned closer, as though inspecting a horse at the
corrals. She asked, "Is it true that graduates of your school are
guaranteed a placement in high government offices?"

The second girl pushed in, saying, "Oh! Tell us of the nights in La
Capitol! The parties! The dancing! The fabulous gowns!"

The third girl looked up at Ramon and said, "Can you touch the tip of
your nose with your tongue?"

"I was tricked into being a stable boy!" growled Ramon.

The mujere cleared her throat. "...and that he is unclaimed...."

An ominous silence bore down upon the little group.

"Look!" Ramon yelped, "He only told you that so he could get a free
meal! He was lying!"

There was a collective gasp from the girls. One asked, in subdued
tones, "Then you are married... or promised?"

Ramon dropped his chin and frowned, glancing to his side as if looking
for escape.

"No," he admitted.

There was a collective sigh from the girls. They focused two beaming
smiles and one querulous expression at him.

"You are available!" cried two girls.

"Where's my sweets?" demanded the third.

"I'm going to kill that old man!" Ramon growled. As if in harmony, his
belly also rumbled.

"Where are you from?" asked another of the women, offering Ramon a
platter of early melons, tortillas and sausages.

"La Capital," Ramon replied, glad for the distraction, his mouth full
of the delicious food. "Eight days ago."

The men came closer, eager for news. One spoke up, "Tell us
everything! Is it true the coalition for state's rights is gaining
control, or are the Centralists ahead?"

Ramon reluctantly lowered the morsel he was about to stuff into his
mouth. "I don't know anything about politics! All I did was go to
school there. I know horses, that's all."

"If you are a horseman, why do you walk?" One of the boys stared
sourly because the girls were gathering about, impressed by his
appearance.

Another boy said, with awed tone, "You came this far in only eight
days?"

"I rode the train as far north as it could go, but I'm making good
time on my own. I've only walked the last hundred miles," Ramon said
with a touch of pride and only a small amount of exaggeration. "I'll
be in Villarica in three more mornings."

The smaller boys clustered about him chorused, 'Wow!' while older boys
shot glum grimaces his way.

Ramon became aware of several girls who were crowding close about him
and he stepped back, unconsciously trying to keep them at a safe
distance. He still wasn't comfortable around any pretty girl, and bold
girls made his throat tighten in panic. "I have to move on, to find
the short-cut across the swamp," he mentioned.

"Oh!" said one of the girls, "I know the way! I would love to show you
how to get through the impassible swamp!" She blinked at him with open
admiration. "My name is Esmeralda. You have dreamy eyes."

"I'll bet you'd like to get him off all alone!" said another girl.
Ramon decided she looked like a sister to the first, so she had to be
Felicia. "I won't allow this! I have a right to talk to him!"

"Do not!"

"Do so!"

"Do not!"

Ramon broke in to say, "Senora, I cannot waste your niece's time."

The mujere took Ramon aside to tell him, "You know how it is with
young girls."

"No, I don't! I am a man! I do not want to know these things!"

"Then, you should have patience. They are growing up, they are bored
with the boys in the village, and you are a handsome young fellow.
They will soon grow tired of their argument and decide who will show
you the path."

"He's mine!" shouted Felicia. She then turned the deep red of the
beets growing in rows beyond the cornfields, as she realized that
everyone in the village was hearing their conversation. "I mean, I
have a right to talk to him!"

"Youngsters! No one goes off alone!" The girl's mother snapped. "No
matter how cute you think the boy is! Besides, there are crops to be
worked after we finish with the ditch!" She fixed Ramon with her gaze,
a calculating stare that made his face burn. "Senor de Caballo, you
are welcome to stop and help with the ditch we are cleaning out."

"We don't need him!" several boys spoke as one.

"My father has sent for me. I must hurry," explained Ramon.

"I'd be right back!" promised Esmeralda. "Tia, please let me go!"

"I'm going!" Felicia pushed in front of her.

"Me, too!" crowed a smaller girl, about half their age.

"Shut up, Perlita!" cried Felicia.

"I travel alone!" Ramon said boldly, determined to appear manly
although he felt like a rabbit being ripped apart by hungry hounds. "I
don't care what you think! I shall find my own way!"

The girl's aunt intervened. "Someone should show you the way. We need
the boys to help with the ditch, but we can spare these girls," the
older woman said, nodded to herself. "They can watch each other."

Thus it was that Ramon was accompanied by three girls when he came to
the place in the road where a faded footpath led off to the side. He
was unhappy. It was bad enough that all the boys in the village stood
and glared as they watched him follow these foolish children down the
road. Now he had to beg these foolish girls to be released from this
indignity. "When did I lose control?" he muttered to himself.

"The Universidad de Ranchero is very prestigious," Felicia mentioned,
apparently talking to herself.

"Exactly WHAT did my papa tell you?" Ramon wondered.

"Oh, only that you have been in this school which allowed only boys,"
said Esmeralda, sighing as if she imagined his deprivation.
Unconsciously, she moved closer to him and murmured, "For a whole
year! You have been without the cheerful companion****p of any
sweetheart?"

"And that you have been learning a trade which will let you provide
very well for your family," said Felicia .

"My papa provides for my family," Ramon grumbled.

"Ah!" Esmeralda slipped even closer and batted her eyes. "But you will
not stay at home forever, will you?"

Felicia interposed, "Surely, someday you will have a family of your
own?"

When Ramon narrowed his eyes and stared at the horizon, she prompted,
with a self-conscious smile, "You are almost old enough now, are you
not?"

"Tell me this," Ramon stopped, forcing them to halt as well. "Did my
papa tell you this before or after your auntie cooked him a huge,
delicious meal?"

"I think it was after, maybe." Esmeralda tilted her head to remember.

"No, it was before," said Felicia. "Hey, wait! Wait for us!"

Ramon paced off, not waiting for them to catch up. "He has done it
again!" he complained to the air, "He has promised someone that I was
available just so they would give him a meal!"

"Here you are!" Esmeralda stopped and pointed, holding on to his
elbow, "I'll just show you the trail and return to the village after
I'm sure you are safely on your way!"

"Not without me!" responded Felicia. "I don't trust you!"

"Look at the pretty flower!" said Perlita.

Ramon barred their way. "Okay, you've showed me the way, now go home!"
He shoved his chin forward to show that he was not going to be bullied
any more, the way his father did when Mama tried to get him to go to
church.

A few moments later, all four were deep in the trees following the
path toward the swamp. Ramon sighed again, resigning himself to their
company. Papa never had any luck arguing with Mama, either. If only
they wouldn't chatter so!

"Women! Why do I have to put up with them?" he growled under his
breath, then spoke aloud, "Where is the little girl?"

"Oh, let her look for flowers," said Felicia. "You can tell us about
the big city! What wonderful sights did you see?"

"What are the ladies wearing?" prompted Esmeralda, the one with the
dreaming eyes, as she tugged him over to her side of the trail.

Ramon stopped and turned suddenly, shaking them off. "Be quiet!" he
commanded.

"I will not!" said Felicia.

"I wasn't talking that loud!" insisted Esmeralda.

"I heard...." Ramon's voice faded at the thud of something massive and
powerful bru****ng through the leaves toward them. He stared in awe at
the man who appeared from the undergrowth, holding the smallest girl
like a rag doll. The man had to be nineteen or twenty hands tall, a
huge man with stout muscles flexing beneath tawny tattooed skin.

Scowling mightily, the man indicated the tiny girl in his hands. "Do
as you're told and you might live," he said.

 

v^v^v^v

So, they were searched and tossed into the tiny pen. Ramon could only
gesture angrily at his captors, whom he could hear outside the log
wall.

"What if she's the wrong one?" the big man was saying.

"We'll wait," came another voice, and Ramon recognized the dusty man
who had spoken to him in the village.

"He was a bandit!" growled Ramon, "No wonder he wanted me to take this
shortcut!"

"If no one else comes by the main road, we'll have to take in what
we've got," said the big man. "You'd better pray someone else comes
along. I don't think these are what he wants." The sound of their
conversation faded into the forest.

When it became apparent they were alone, the girls raised their own
voices.

"This is all your fault!" said Felicia. "We wouldn't be here if we
weren't trying to help you!"

"Oh, please! You've got to do something!" cried Esmeralda.

"I want my mommy!" whined Perlita.

"Quit crowding around!" Ramon snapped, as he picked through the
supplies that had been yanked out of his pouch. Looking up, he gauged
the height of a snag in the tree above and nodded with approval.

"DO something!" Esmeralda grabbed his arm.

"I'm trying to!" Ramon's voice was fading. When he got angry his voice
tended to grow faint, which meant that it was hard work for him to
shout in excitement. At the moment, he was saving his energy. "Back
away!"

He uncoiled a length of braided lariat, a riata, which he had made
himself during spare moments at school. Pu****ng the girls into a
corner, he drew back to throw. As the loop sailed high, Felicia caught
his elbow again and the riata snagged on a low twig.

"What'd you do that for?" demanded Ramon.

"Aren't you going to take us with you?" she asked, tears in her eyes.

"I'm going to get you out! I can't help it, I have to take care of
helpless girls!" Ramon raged, his voice fading away so they could
barely hear him continue, "Even if they don't deserve it!"

The slender branch bent and broke as he yanked the riata free. Again
Ramon drew back the loop, then stopped to glare at the girls, but they
meekly stayed in the corner.

The loop sailed, caught and hung. Ramon pulled himself to the top of
the wall and looked back at three frightened faces. "Keep quiet!" he
ordered, and they nodded. He dropped outside the wall and went to the
ropes holding the wall that was the gate in place. The ropes were
tough - by the time he finished sawing through them, the blade of his
knife was chipped and dull.

"Now I'll have to take you back home," he said. "I'm already a
half-day late, I've had to save you from bandits and I have ruined my
knife! Stupid fool girls!"

"We want to go with you!" wailed Esmeralda.

"No! I don't want you! Leave me alone!"

Felicia, driven back by his anger, said in a small, sad voice, "Then
you must go on. We can stay away from the banditos - we know another
way back."

Before Ramon could insist, they had withdrawn into the brush. From
somewhere in the undergrowth he could hear Perlita call, "But I wanted
to say goodbye!"

Eventually, he made his way to the other side of the swamp. Before he
stepped back onto the royal road, he grumbled to himself, "I don't
know who is worse, banditos or girls!"

 
v^v^v^v

He strode the long miles from La Capital to Villarica del Norte, one
foot before the other, taking the shock of footfall with the
springiness of his knees, until eventually he overtook a familiar cart
being pulled the same direction by a dispirited old mule.

The driver of the cart, a homely little woman, wrinkled the leather of
her face into a smile and inquired of him, "Why are you in such a
hurry to go to your death, young caballero?"

"Hah," replied Ramon. He slowed his step to keep pace with the cart.
"I'm too young to die, Abuelita."

"It is a pleasure to meet such a polite young master of the horses,"
the old woman said.

Ramon laughed. "Why do you say this? A master of the horses, and yet I
am on foot?"

"The coyotes slink in the brush. The birds build their nest in the
cactus. Little children play their games. I see things." The old woman
shook the abraded reins to make the mule step a little faster. "You
are a gentleman, and yet you were so rude, earlier, when the girls
asked to travel along with you a little way."

Ramon raised an eyebrow, wondering how she could have known what had
occurred miles from the roadway, then sniffed in disdain. "It was
dangerous to go on. They could not have kept up," he replied.

"They knew that," she agreed.

"Then why did they try?"

The old woman glanced sideways at him, one eyebrow lifted. "If you do
not know this, then perhaps you are better off in the desert with your
Papá."

"I am in a hurry to get home, Abuelita. I can't stop and flirt with
girls!"

"Perhaps not. But, you didn't have to call them fools to their face."

"They should have left me alone!"

"Then listen to me, young caballero. Today you have encountered two
mighty forces. Soon you will be asked to choose between them."

"That doesn't make any sense! I'm not joining anybody! I work by
myself!"

"That is not for you to say." The old woman looked at him with sadness
in her faded eyes as she twitched the reins.

"Crazy old woman!" Ramon muttered. He stepped faster, picking up his
pace, leaving her behind him on the lonely road.

He was scarcely parted from her before the painful, sharp groans of
the cartwheel ceased, leaving only echoes drifting back from the
fields. An aching stillness flooded in upon the land.

Ramon looked back and the road was empty.

END PROLOG:

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   http://www.wanderway.com/tales.htm
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JamesE
 




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[Orig][FanFic] The Adventures of Macho Caballo, Chapter 0, Prolo
James Eades <jeeades@[  2007-10-18 19:47:04 

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