"Bill Martin" <bill_r_martin@[EMAIL PROTECTED]
> wrote in message
news:2008012614175316807-billrmartin@[EMAIL PROTECTED]
> Remember, like the year Rob entered, I cannot judge my own fic, so this
is
> up to those that have entered this year's NYC to judge...
>
> New Year's Challenge - Medium Omake Entry
>
> Team Deadly Redheads, Take 3
> Genie - Rune Soldier Louie
> Miss Yukari (a.k.a. Inspector Widget) - Nerima Daikon Brothers
> Nami - One Piece
>
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Alas, I only watched about two episodes of LOTL when it was on, and
forgotten most of those. The only one of your team I'm familar with is
Nami, and about the only thing out of character I see from her is no
obsession with the crystals (since she generally is driven to acquire the
most valuable items in any vicinity she happens to find herself, I would
expect it to only take her five to ten days in the LOTL to locate,
acquire,
and catalog by color and weight every crystal available and to hell with
any
other priority or long term unbalance it might cause - and be thankful and
regretting alternatively that Usopp isn't there to experiment with them
for
her to figure how what combo will do what).
I'd also have to be a lot more familar with LOTL to be able to judge if
the
time loop sequence you have at the end is accurate and closed properly.
Sorry this isn't any real help, but no one has said anything yet, so I
thought I'd throw out the few ideas I had in case it might start some
dialogue.
Judgment: not qualified to make one.
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